You have written yet another poem I can connect to music. This one reminds me of a song by From First to Last called Featuring Some of Your Favorite Words.
Btw, I'm not sure if you meant to do this or not, but in the last line you write "think" when the correct form is "thinks". ^^
Crap? This is not crap, sweetie... this is great!! I love it, especially the first part!! And now I can finally breathe... holding my breath for that long was a tad complicated, but it was worth it, definitely!^^