Very nice. I love the line "I hide behind my shame and call it home" nice, good poem.

I wanted to thank you for your reviews - and what better way than to review some of your work?

I loved the contradiction in this - you created a literary world in your poem, which is intriguing, I have to confess. Just watch out for small, tiny things like 'She deceive me with' which should really be 'she deceived me with' etc. It makes for a smoother reading, I find.

Anyway, keep the fantastic work up!

wow... i like this, much better than my own...

wow, it was deep... though it didnt really tell why you were in her hold, and a slave...

This is beautiful.

Very Tragic.

I love how you portray your emotions and experiences through poetry. Well done

i really liked it. i thought it was rather well written. my one poem, "mirror" was similar to this for the first few lines but after that they were nothing alike. but yeah, i liked it. and with the reverse (a guy because i am a girl) i have felt the same way (at least if you are portraying the same point that i think you are.) good work. keep writing.