|Reviews for Spellbound|
| blackberrydream 6/4/08 . chapter 1
Very nice. I love the line "I hide behind my shame and call it home" nice, good poem.
| Colour Me Stunned 4/11/08 . chapter 1
I wanted to thank you for your reviews - and what better way than to review some of your work?
I loved the contradiction in this - you created a literary world in your poem, which is intriguing, I have to confess. Just watch out for small, tiny things like 'She deceive me with' which should really be 'she deceived me with' etc. It makes for a smoother reading, I find.
Anyway, keep the fantastic work up!
| Shadowe Goddess 4/11/08 . chapter 1
wow... i like this, much better than my own...
| Lilyre and Livvyg 1/19/08 . chapter 1
wow, it was deep... though it didnt really tell why you were in her hold, and a slave...
| Britani- Friend of the Bears 1/18/08 . chapter 1
This is beautiful.
I love how you portray your emotions and experiences through poetry. Well done
| smile for the sunshine 1/17/08 . chapter 1
i really liked it. i thought it was rather well written. my one poem, "mirror" was similar to this for the first few lines but after that they were nothing alike. but yeah, i liked it. and with the reverse (a guy because i am a girl) i have felt the same way (at least if you are portraying the same point that i think you are.) good work. keep writing.