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| blackberrydream 2008-06-04 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice. I love the line "I hide behind my shame and call it home" nice, good poem. |
| Nagame 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseI wanted to thank you for your reviews - and what better way than to review some of your work? I loved the contradiction in this - you created a literary world in your poem, which is intriguing, I have to confess. Just watch out for small, tiny things like 'She deceive me with' which should really be 'she deceived me with' etc. It makes for a smoother reading, I find. Anyway, keep the fantastic work up! |
| Shadowe Goddess 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abusewow... i like this, much better than my own... |
| Lilyre and Livvyg 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abusewow, it was deep... though it didnt really tell why you were in her hold, and a slave... |
| Pretty Girl is Suffering 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful. Very Tragic. I love how you portray your emotions and experiences through poetry. Well done |
| smile for the sunshine 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abusei really liked it. i thought it was rather well written. my one poem, "mirror" was similar to this for the first few lines but after that they were nothing alike. but yeah, i liked it. and with the reverse (a guy because i am a girl) i have felt the same way (at least if you are portraying the same point that i think you are.) good work. keep writing. |