Chilling, great use of rhyming and mythical creatures!!

What a supremely lovely little poem you have crafted. It's the second poem in the last hour I've read that has used rhyme and rhthym so well! Lovely, natural rhyming and excellent diction as well. Such a nice, upbeat little piece. So different from my own work, yet I love it. You did very, very nicely with this one. Again I find myself hard pressed to find something to improve on or critique, and believ me that's not something I say often, tonigh excepted of course. Please feel free to let me know if you would like more reviews, specific constructive criticism, or anything like that.