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Ngoc1231 2008-06-22 . chapter 5
This was the kind of story I was looking for today. Great story, and sorry for the really short review but it is thundering.
I might go and check out other stories you wrote.
~*~Ngoc123~*~
marikamaroca 2008-02-05 . chapter 5
while not of super incredible literary value
i stil liked it
i know it was kidna overly optimistic and all
but
i m a sap
and i liked it anyway
(:
Dot Cubed 2008-01-27 . chapter 3
Aw yay! They're together! I love how natural that felt for them, and how cute they are together. I just hope that the morning after everything is still happy and sunshiney. Anyway, and I know I've already mentioned this, I really like how realistic this story is. It's nice and simple, and I love the relatability of the characters.
tini5585 2008-01-22 . chapter 5
I really enjoyed this story, even though it was predominantly dialogue. I think you did a good job of making realistic characters and provided solid background information through their conversations. Good job!
ParisLi 2008-01-22 . chapter 5
I really enjoyed this story, but I would like more of a reaction shot regarding Mickey after the fact. Obviously her bevhavior doesn't come across as "sisterly." I'm looking forward to your one-shot, too!
LondonLi 2008-01-20 . chapter 4
I KNEW something like this would happen! While I'm very thankful for the quick update, this isn't the kind of double-cliffhanger we need! I hope we get another chapter soon!
LondonLi 2008-01-19 . chapter 3
That was certainly fast! I hope we find out that there's a good morning after in the next chapter!
LondonLi 2008-01-19 . chapter 2
Yeah, another update! Thanks for releasing the chapters so quickly.
Dot Cubed 2008-01-18 . chapter 2
So I really like this! The characters are very relateable and believable: I actually feel as though Vera and Miles are real people. You haven't created a story chock full of drama, which I especially appreciate. My only problem is I've noticed a few grammar mistakes here and there, but we all make those.

Anyway, another great chapter. I love seeing the development of their relationship. They're so cute together.
LondonLi 2008-01-17 . chapter 1
It does seem a little rough, but I'm enjoying the story so far. I'm glad that you have it all done, so we hopefully won't have to wait too long for updates! Thanks for writing!
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