FictionPress.com - let the words flow Share/Save/Bookmark
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Your Baby Girl
KatieTheWriter
2008-02-29
ch 1, 		abuseSorry what happened with your father. That's so sad and I'm glad you said you have gotten better. You did a great job at writing your emotions. You will see him in heaven one day. :)
roalwand
2008-01-17
ch 1, 		abuseThis poem captures your loneliness and aching for your dad perfectly. Sorry about losing your dad. Good writing though. Please r/r my materials thanks.
Return to Top