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Doxology 2008-01-17 . chapter 1
Pretty awesome. I like the flow. A lot. You did misspell desert though. It kinda looks like you're referring to what comes after a meal. Which is good in its own special way. Anyways, great job.

Peace & Love

~> Hp
imjlotherealone 2008-01-17 . chapter 1
This was utterly pointless. Even though it took at most 20 seconds to read, it was a waste of time. What the hell, reviewing it is an even greater waste of time.
Bye.
P.S. By dessert, do you mean desert?
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