I liked this I thought it was a bit sad though cause I know that when I was little I used to hate thinking about getting my hair cut off. Nice work though.

This one was cute. I pictured the whole thing ].

I love how you take such a little thing (getting gum in your hair) and make it sound so powerful and monumental... the decriptions are beautiful and the ending line is awesome

Whoa-awesome poem, even if the subject could be taken "silly". Great style or writing.

this was a genuinely creative piece, and not only that but it was written so very well. AMAZINGLY DONE.