|Reviews for gravity brings down more than just rain|
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea 4/19/08 . chapter 1
I liked this I thought it was a bit sad though cause I know that when I was little I used to hate thinking about getting my hair cut off. Nice work though.
| creepy kiss on tuesday 1/20/08 . chapter 1
This one was cute. I pictured the whole thing ].
| simpleplan13 1/17/08 . chapter 1
I love how you take such a little thing (getting gum in your hair) and make it sound so powerful and monumental... the decriptions are beautiful and the ending line is awesome
| Shadows in the Fire 1/17/08 . chapter 1
Whoa-awesome poem, even if the subject could be taken "silly". Great style or writing.
| randompoetry 1/17/08 . chapter 1
this was a genuinely creative piece, and not only that but it was written so very well. AMAZINGLY DONE.