Reviews for Those Last Five Minutes

The Reverse Edge Blade 2008-01-18 ch 1,	abuseA great poem! Full of emotion and your lovely rhyming! I was a bit surprised when I saw how long it was, so the experience was a little different in length, but it was good. Keep at it! The Reverse Edge Blade
melbell 2008-01-18 ch 1,	abuseit seems like your rhyming gets a lot better each time. good job.
simpleplan13 2008-01-18 ch 1,	abuseI like the rhyming a lot.. and the idea behind this piece is something I can definitely relate to... nicely done
XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-01-18 ch 1,	abuseSo were feeling a little emo. It's cool. I've put almost the same thing on one of my poems' I hate the world' But anway great poem. When I write my stress is let out. I hope your the same way. Keep writing. It helps Kristie Marie
maximusrexmundi 2008-01-17 ch 1,	abuse;) you will have to make up for it by loving tomorrow. And forgiveness is a powerful thing, it only takes a will to use it and get it in motion. I hope it goes well :)
Assana 2008-01-17 ch 1,	abusetres interessante, mon amie and ur poem est tres onne =D not very long, but it is half in french...IT'S FRANGLAIS!