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ddz008 2009-10-13 . chapter 18
Roan fighting to not be the lion and at the same time wanting to let go... his addiction to pills and the ever constant patient and love of Dylan. And he... still loving and pining after a long death man. The show of humanity in every one of your stories... the worst and the best things that can be seen outh there. Wonderful story!
juliandarling 2009-05-02 . chapter 18
Not only do you have fracking excellent taste in music (the Pansy Division references are killing me with awesomeness) but you portrayed a gay FTM with respect and dignity. You are seriously so ** awesome. I read a lot of original slash and you'd be surprised how much how much transphobic trash turns up casually in this genre, and it's always really nice to find a writer who can introduce a trans chracter and their story without turning it into a circus side show. Another great installment! I can't wait to find out where Dylan and Roan are going :D
perrinette 2008-11-17 . chapter 18
Quite good!
secretskeptinsilence 2008-05-17 . chapter 18
Always nice to have a story end with Paris. I'm not even going to try to write a long review for this, it would take pages. So i'll be looking foreward to the next one.
Zatyrmoon 2008-05-17 . chapter 18
:) amazing as always... can't wait for the next installment !
secretskeptinsilence 2008-05-05 . chapter 16
I can't wait to see how you end this, which, judging from your previous stories should be soon. Seems like it will have a truely happy ending this time though.
secretskeptinsilence 2008-04-20 . chapter 15
I realized lately how different the tone of this story has become from the first four, but it's not a bad thing. The dream about Connor was unsuspected, but was actually really interesting to see how similar their situations have become in their self destruction.
secretskeptinsilence 2008-04-14 . chapter 14
Holden keeps getting more interesting with every chapter, and finally, i figured Roan would od sometime.
secretskeptinsilence 2008-04-07 . chapter 13
i'm happy somebody else reviewed. This story seriously deserves so much more credit. And, i like that the chapters just keep getting more dramatic, and action-filled.
Zatyrmoon 2008-04-06 . chapter 13
I've been reading the infected series as long as you've been posting it, I am just an admittedly horrible reviewer. However, when I saw how few reviews this has gotten I was surprised and upset. This series has to be one of the best thought out and formulated on the whole site. There are a lot of updates that I'll read between classes, or if I have a few minutes before bed, but I always wait to read your updates till I have the time to actually sit down and read them, because I know they have enough detail that I want to take the time to enjoy them. Anyway, I just thought I'd review and say keep up the awesome writing.
secretskeptinsilence 2008-04-01 . chapter 12
wow. Well that was unexpected to say the least, but it seems like an effective way to snap Roan out of his depression, or get him to kill someone.
secretskeptinsilence 2008-03-30 . chapter 11
So Roans on the edge of a breakdown and Dylan just got kidnapped, nice cliffhanger. Looking foreward to what happens though.
notmanos 2008-03-20 . chapter 10
I don't want to spoil anything, but it looks like these stories are on two separate tracks. Roan is the only connecting factor, that and how he deas with certain things.

And you're right, Dylan and Roan don't have the same chemistry , but then they simply couldn't. Dylan's a different person, and Roan has pretty much closed himself off emotionally. He's still mourning Paris.
secretskeptinsilence 2008-03-19 . chapter 10
I agree with Dee's point, Dylan and Roan dont seem to have the same chemistry as Roan and Paris did. Does the church have something to do with the missing kid, or is it just a continuing side arc. Normally the entire story ends up tying together somehow, and this one doesn't seem like it will.
secretskeptinsilence 2008-03-14 . chapter 9
Just when you think the chuch is done for, it's back again. And I have to point out that you write descriptions of people incredibly well.
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