 Julius Gillian 2008-01-18 . chapter 1Very bitter. I think this is very bitter, period. But it feels emotionless. I'm not critiquing it as emotionless you must realize, what I'm trying to say is that this came off as a matter-of-fact way, like your telling this person matter-of-factly with how you feel while having your legs crossed in a neutral feeling with no pity in your voice whatsoever. Not so much as cold conviction either, but this poem makes me feel the narrator really understands what's behind her, in front, et cetera.
On a side note, I.. well, I know plenty of genuinely good guys that might change your point of view. My point in bringing it up is that they (we)(I) are not all self-centered, egotistical, sex maniac, morons. At least I hope the majority of us are not to give you the benefit of the doubt. :S
This poem reflects your name 'Oh-Hum'.
And that's how I kinda feel for this poem. lol. Oh-hum. |