I like this piece.. ending with the quote was great and the message of the piece is so true and beautifully written
One grammar error I'm pretty sure protraid is not a word.. did you mean portrait or portrayed maybe? Im not sure...

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Wow. This was really powerful, especially since we just finished discussing the truth verses belief in English. Human beings are always looking for something to believe in. It's kind of sad, isn't it?

this was an incredibly artistic AND intelligent piece. i thoroughly enjoyed it. i would point out exactly what i liked but to be quite honest there was just too much. nice use of quotage.

I. Love. You.

You are an amazing writer! =D

*whimpers* Lucky...

This is so true... Great job, as usual. I envy you, you have the best muse in the world!! You keep writing, and writing... and I love it!!

I don't think it gets too much, not at all!^^