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Keith Anthony Power Campbell 2008-09-13 . chapter 1
Congrats on your first haiku!

I have always wanted to learn japanese (Stemming from my anime obsessions), but have always been busy with other things. Your haiku has given me one more reason to learn the language :).

For now, my only critique of the poem is that its form vaguely resembles a snowman...lol.

Anyways, congrats again!
kloun mannequin 2008-05-13 . chapter 1
aw, that's sweet,lovely, I like the stuff with winter,a warm winter 'cause you're with your friends. it's a nice feeling.
Quinty 2008-03-09 . chapter 1
Wow!

I can actually read it, but I have no idea what the words are. I'm just a second year student.

This is awesome! I'm impressed.
xDancingintheRainx 2008-01-22 . chapter 1
I really like this. I can't read Japanese, (or speak it for that matter) but its really awesome that you can and that you made a poem in Japanese. It really lets who you are shine through, considering how much you love the Japanese language. Great work. =)
Kitty Puff 2008-01-22 . chapter 1
Looks pretty (Japanese always does) and impressive that you could do it in Japanese anyway However I think a majority of people who don't speak Japanese might have some difficulties reading this. You do have a translation don't you?
Rose Valentine 2008-01-19 . chapter 1
How did you manage to do that? I mean, uploading a story with Japanese characters on it - I can't do that. But it's great, the way you did it.
Lisa98 2008-01-18 . chapter 1
Impressive. however i cannot read it either. going to look at the other one and see if it's translated!
Translucently Opaque 2008-01-18 . chapter 1
Well I must say that it looks really cool. Sadly though, I can't read Japanese. Maybe you could translate it into English as well. Is that possible?
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