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| Pinkamoo 2008-04-26 ch 1,  | abuseBack whenever this was new, and not old, old, old - you still must have been something! You're a great writer. Aw, the poor cake, didn't get eaten! Got splattered all over the place. Adorable story, though! I like the characters, specially Eric. |
| x3life 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseomg this is so cute!! loved it |
| bluefishies 2008-02-21 ch 1, anon. | abusewa, my stomach's all topsy turvy - in a good way. Soo real, so cute! You lead a secret life where this actually happened to you don't you? Wish it was longer but great job! |
| Evelyn Bleu 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abusecute!! |
| EnChAnTeD-KoReAn 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abusedefinately adorable...nice fluff...i like this oneshot. i liked how you gave enough background info on eric & riley's quirky relationship (very original by the way) w/o saying too much. Good work!! |
| peanutneko 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseSoo cute! |
| jinx89 2008-02-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is cute...it makes me want to go, "Aw!" Very well done! |
| twinklee 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abusehahaha love the cake part, very original :] |
| woodstock1969 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuseAw, I loved this! Eric is just too darn cute for his own good. Marvelous job! |
| sweet vanilla mint 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuse“On my planet, it does. Just like how you and I make sense.” Aw... I want someone to say this to me, too! Hahaha! :) good job on this story. It's so sweet. Thanks for posting! |
| HaPpYGuRl 2008-02-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw...I WANT MY ERIC RIGHT NOW! |
| TwinkleHeart 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuseaw |
| Eruptingfender9 2008-01-29 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely loved this. You're a brilliant writer; the random comments you put here and there are hysterical, and so is the dialogue. I'm a sucker for geeks, even if Eric claims he isn't. And the whole cake thing along with Riley not seeing him for a long time was adorable. The funny thing is I have a story about a cake, and the main character's name is Riley, too, haha. Anyway, great job. You made my night :). |
| RoseLife 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseNAW so very cute fab job xD |
| beccabrighteyes 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseI likey! It's really sweet. |