this is good

Wow... That was.. that was incredibly hot. I'm not going to lie, that's... That's good stuff. XD

Hot story! Very sexy! Well written...

Wow...just wow...that put a fresh twist on threesomes, though I wouldn't even call that, this is way hotter on paper then 3 people getting it on, though I guess it depends on people involved) Darn it, I might go get my tongue re-pierced, I bet my piercer will be saying thank you, for extra cash flow. Great story.

That...was...HOT! Hell, I'm not even into girls and that had me turned on lol. Nicely written. Bravo

i'm not gonna lie, that got my blood boiling. that an at the end pulled the whole thing together.

WOAH that's hot
man
like m
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and im not ashamed of it!

wow...that's all I can say...WOW! That was hot!

oh man.. haha

I'm not even sure what to say to this. Definitely had me wishing I was one of them.. xD

This is an awesome story! and I love your authors' note lol good job keep writing I'll keep reading!

Wow... so very smutty...
But honestly, I found the author's note at the end to be more entertaining than this entire story. v.v
Thumbs up for Authors note! ^_^b
Thumbs down for story. V_Vp

Wow... *sits there dumbly blushing* ... just wow. Amazing... you are so fantasizing... XD

** that was hot. Lol, I love the little commentary in the end. I needed to read something non-depressing. Gah, life gets frustrating with a sexually confused friend...