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| fatbird33 2008-03-15 ch 1,  | abuseaww sweet. i love that movie:) |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseGood work, sweet rhymes, i'd change 1 thing... the number of syllables (But I guess I tell everyone that) lol. Anyways awesome, **as usual** -And I hope someday... you find Nemo XD |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abusecute metaphor... I like it a lot |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuselol aww so cute! |
| painted.music 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abusekonnichi wa Aw, so adorable. Honestly, I love the innocence this portrays - and, though I don't normally like too many rhyming poems, I think the rhyme perfected it. :) Beautiful. Absolutely stunning and adorable. :D [+ to favorites] Zaijen -Shan- |
| Katrina Zeffirelli 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseAW! I LOVE IT! Awesome! =D --Ur cuz |