Reviews for One Sunny Day - FictionPress.com

Moondog Dozier 2008-02-03 ch 1,	abuseI like the tone of this, as it remains consistent and light. The conclusion, and the end line wrap this up well, as it completes the modernity of the work with a timeless concept. Well written. MD:77.
TheDJ 2008-01-27 ch 1,	abuseAs always, a brilliant poem. I loved the way you drew together your feelings in the poem. The structure of the poem was very good (although not rhyming yet ;) - jokes). Brilliant poem mate, can't wait to talk again. (And, on the last review, not all men are that bad :p... well... most of us are ;)) Cheerio --TheDJ
Beautiful Bluebird 2008-01-24 ch 1,	abuseAww... :D I'm really loving this poem. It reminds me of what my ex used to say to me. Men are stupid... Write more poems! You have a lot of angst in those IM conversations to write a ton of poems. That guy's an idiot. BTW, thanks for the reviews! peace and crackers! :P love ya, Katie