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| jellywelly 2008-01-23 ch 1,  | abuseLOL " I think green's more my type " I like how it ends :) |
| SheridanSpence 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuse"Your beautiful azure eyes. Full of contempt and hate." I really like the contrast created by these two lines. Nice job overall. |
| Random-Idiocity 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseThere are a few rhymes in here, good job. Keep it Up! |