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| Assana 2008-01-26 ch 1,  | abuseYou make me wonder what happened, but then you give me just enough info to already know. i like that. =] |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseI love the repetition of right... and the rhyming... nicely done |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseGL GIRL. nice poem. Keep writting! Kristie Marie |
| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseAs always, beautifully written and emotionally balanced. Nice work; hope things start to turn better for you. Cuz I've seen pics of you, and you're not ugly. =] -stix- |
| The Reverse Edge Blade 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is such a sad poem... It had such a deep meaning, and your rhyming made it so clear how you felt. The length was good, since you weren't too repetetive. You're good at putting your thoughts into words! It'll go in my favorites! The Reverse Edge Blade |
| melbell 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abusei adore the "right?" parts tehe nice one. =] |