i cant really review these because ... they're just not reviewable. they're raw emotion on a plate in elegant wording guise. but for this one ijust have to say

'this flawlessness I try to attain

in the end will build my tomb'

it rings so painfully true...

You are the most beautiful person I have ever known. Inside and out. No one is perfect, actually, you being perfect would make you... Someone other than yourself.

You are amazing, no matter what happens or how lost you are- I am still here for you.

Wow. Pretty darn amazing. I like your rhyme scheme... you're able to rhyme AND still use great figurative language