like this howl worlds out to show me... was howl a play on words of a misspelling of whole?.. world's (by the way this and the line after it were my favorite!)
like I already know it, all... that comma seemed oddly placed

I love the second line about karma.. that was great.. the whole piece was really nice and it flowed really well.. I also like the part about the rain.. nice jog

I love the questions in the piece... they really make you think

I really love those last four lines

interesting how ambiguous this friend is... I like it

This isnt my favorite... the God Damn seems odd to me, but I do love the second part of the last line a lot

I LOVE the last five lines

I love how each stanza could stand alone, but together they also fit wonderfully

powerful piece.. especially the line about the venom.

I love the phrase "pretty mess"... this piece flows wonderfully... and the whole thing is really awesome

I love the ending... beautiful job

I love the learning apprehended by youth line... I also love the last line... great piece

I love the beginning with the horoscope and the radio... nicely done

I love the connection between the beginning and the end... I also love the stars part

I love the funny tone in the beginning... I also love the two lines about the water... and the title is really great as well

I love the second to last stanza a lot... beautiful piece