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| Melissa Norvell 2008-01-19 ch 1,  | abuseIt was interesting but you have a few small errors. It was a nice angsty piece, but keep in mind that angst isn't all sappy things it can even berge on horror-based ideas as my work does. If you need help with writing angst you can feel free to read my works they might help you out. It wasn't bad at all. I think it was very nice and this is coming from someone who writes for the dark opus. |