Woops, sorry about that, what I was going to say was "something I don't like".
Hayley Elizabeth.

I am without words.
All I can think is of how much this made me think about God, and love him more than ever.
Your still amazing, will you ever write something
Hayley Elizabeth.

It's really good, I like the add ons, but you need to take out the "too" in "her innocence too defiled", it doesn't really fit the pattern. But it's really good... makes me think about what I'm doing in the world... and I can tell you, not very much... Thanks for the thought provoking words. You're wonderful.
xox
Shealtiel

love this
you really captured that feeling that we all have of just not being enough to be part of his plan, but God wants us in it anyway. great poem, going under my favorites.