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Thenardier
2008-03-11
ch 1,
abuseI like the way you italicized a few choice words, and everything else falls into place. Lovely.
xxopticaldelusions
2008-03-09
ch 1,
abuseREVIEW GAME>>

i love the poems in which a feeling can be conveyed through so little words, and i really like the italicizing to make a point. great job!
simpleplan13
2008-01-22
ch 1,
abuseI love the title and the italicized parts... short and beautiful piece
Lurid Black
2008-01-22
ch 1,
abuseSweet, well written, too bad it's short, i'd love to read more.
Even in 3 lines its well written, keep at it =D
burning in effigy
2008-01-21
ch 1,
abuseshort and simple but makes a point

(i love short poems that are able to convey an emotion/thought in so few words)

great job :]
perpetual questions
2008-01-19
ch 1,
abuseNot really a haiku, but that's okay. Nice sense of urgency and desperation. I like it.
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