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| Thenardier 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseI like the way you italicized a few choice words, and everything else falls into place. Lovely. |
| xxopticaldelusions 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseREVIEW GAME>> i love the poems in which a feeling can be conveyed through so little words, and i really like the italicizing to make a point. great job! |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseI love the title and the italicized parts... short and beautiful piece |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseSweet, well written, too bad it's short, i'd love to read more. Even in 3 lines its well written, keep at it =D |
| burning in effigy 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseshort and simple but makes a point (i love short poems that are able to convey an emotion/thought in so few words) great job :] |
| perpetual questions 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseNot really a haiku, but that's okay. Nice sense of urgency and desperation. I like it. |