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Thenardier 2008-03-11 . chapter 1
I like the way you italicized a few choice words, and everything else falls into place. Lovely.
PancakesAndCoffee 2008-03-09 . chapter 1
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i love the poems in which a feeling can be conveyed through so little words, and i really like the italicizing to make a point. great job!
simpleplan13 2008-01-22 . chapter 1
I love the title and the italicized parts... short and beautiful piece
Lurid Black 2008-01-22 . chapter 1
Sweet, well written, too bad it's short, i'd love to read more.
Even in 3 lines its well written, keep at it =D
burning in effigy 2008-01-21 . chapter 1
short and simple but makes a point

(i love short poems that are able to convey an emotion/thought in so few words)

great job :]
a silenced revolution 2008-01-19 . chapter 1
Not really a haiku, but that's okay. Nice sense of urgency and desperation. I like it.
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