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Reviews For: Lost in Translation

TT-da-lamanite
2008-02-05
ch 2,
abusemore poetry for fiction, lovely discriptions, and most definatly a great way to end it maybe?
Bob Evans
2008-01-22
ch 1,
abuseSo where does Daron's jail-time come into the story? Are there more chapters coming?
TT-da-lamanite
2008-01-22
ch 1,
abuseWow, thats not bad, not bad at all, very nice, all of the hate full reasons that men would want to kill men. Your a Romantic writer, full of the dark and gothic side of men, and using poetry to discrib a scene. I just noticed. Still very nice story, If a bit wordy, maybe thats what makes it elegant.

-T.T.
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