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| TT-da-lamanite 2008-02-05 ch 2, | abusemore poetry for fiction, lovely discriptions, and most definatly a great way to end it maybe? |
| Bob Evans 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseSo where does Daron's jail-time come into the story? Are there more chapters coming? |
| TT-da-lamanite 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseWow, thats not bad, not bad at all, very nice, all of the hate full reasons that men would want to kill men. Your a Romantic writer, full of the dark and gothic side of men, and using poetry to discrib a scene. I just noticed. Still very nice story, If a bit wordy, maybe thats what makes it elegant. -T.T. |