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| Take the Money and Run 2008-02-24 ch 3, | abuseThis is a pretty nice collection of haikus, and im not much of a haiku writer myself. i really like the last line in Happiness, and my favorite out of them would have to be Sadness. one thing, though, is in Love, the way the last line is written seems a little incomplete. its not too bad though. overall nice! --SB, review marathon |
| Random-Idiocity 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseExcellent haiku, the second line is my favorite. Keep it Up! |