Reviews for Everyday Action Guy

Reviews For: Everyday Action Guy

Shiranui Akatsuki 2008-05-11 ch 1,	abuseThat's one hell of a story, dude. That's one hell of a story. It's freakin' funny and crazy. Gotta hand it to you, man. I love the humor. I look forward to the next chapter with laughter (and it's been four months. Where are you?), so please update soon!
Kumquat21 2008-03-16 ch 1,	abuseAhahahaha! Very good. Very funny. Chapter 2?
felicia13 2008-03-01 ch 1,	abuseHey, Dice. Nice story. It's really action-y. I loved that little girl. She was so messed up! It was great. I wish there were random people coming to MY door to kill me under the disguise of selling cookies... And Jenkins... he was awesome, too. I sort of hope Bob gets killed. He's a bit of a jerk. A gross jerk. Ew. But there'll need to be another chapter for that to happen (hint hint). wink wink, nudge nudge Later, Dice. Except some one-word e-mails soon... Felicia.
Outlaw02 Extreme 2008-02-25 ch 1,	abuseHeya, Outlaw02 here again, I swear I had missed out something in the action-prose scene. The humour really cracked me up even though it was supposed to be a serious matter, and the parody of Leeroy Jenkins (Is it?) was the killer of this chapter's humour. Action wise is well done, considering that Bob was going against a girl scout. The storyline does feel tight paced in one way or another, I'm definitely be waiting for the chapter for this prose. Outlaw02
truthordeal 2008-01-24 ch 1,	abuseThis...is...awesome. I'm still holding my sides from laughing so much. I mean, who can you trust when you can't trust the girl scouts? I like Bob though, because he seems like an actual person. Not Barry Sue, or whatever they are calling the male version this week. I am glad that I saved this one for last, and if you are so inclined, please create a second chapter sometime soon.
Melissa Norvell 2008-01-22 ch 1,	abuseWow. I hadn't read anything like this. You definitely bring some originality to FictionPress. I really enjoyed this little piece of work you have and I'll be back for an update! Good luck!
DeidaraXTobi 2008-01-19 ch 1,	abuseThis is definitely something new and different. I was just complaining to my brother about how lame and cliche most of the stories in the manga section are getting... (Because they are) All the Daisukes and Sakuras and Lilys are getting on my nerves. Fine, have japanese characters, it IS the manga section, but for crying out loud, try something a little different... Argh. Anyway, I thought this was interesting and hilarious, and it pulled me in and made me wonder what happens next. Always a good thing! Plus, I love the name Bob! Way to go!
Midnight Philosophy 2008-01-19 ch 1,	abuseOh. My. Gosh. This is the funniest thing I've ever read. Really interesting. You should write children's books. Never trust the girls who come to your door trying to sell you cookies! They are EVIL! Great story, by the way. Hilarious.
SympleSymon 2008-01-19 ch 1,	abuseHeh, going crazy indeed! Can't believe I didn't spot your name on this when I original spied it glancing down the Just In lists. Sorry man, just guessed you were no longer on here - glad I was wrong! Awesome new story, can't wait to see how it goes on. SympleSymon

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