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| blackberrydream 2008-05-03 ch 1,  | abuseOh wow, I LOVE this story. When I was reading the 'ten years later' part I was afraid it was going to have some crappy ending but that was so good! So sad! That last line was just really...powerful. You brought me to tears! |
| Xx-Blue-Eyed-Fey-xX 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abusei'm assuming teh ring is a wedding ring...wow, i'm suprised, for some reason that one rly hit me hard. your story is good if not sad. keep writing. |
| Dark Emo Shadow 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseow fuck that is sad-but so...i dunno is beautiful a good way to describe it? but it was wonderful to read. |
| The Cruel Irony 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing. Best slash ever; great job. -Irony |
| .W E R E - H U N T E R. 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was AMAZING. Somehow, I had a slight feeling that things wouldn't work out, but I didn't think it'd end like that. The last sentence was just.. Well, all I'm saying is that my Kleenex hates you. Cheers; W/H |
| magalina 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseD: You always make me sad... I mean that in agood way :) This one was beautiful, I loved the ending. Keep it up!! :D |
| Back of Beyond 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseSuch a sad (yet faintly happy) ending. :[ I want to read more! Oh, and was Jay back in America for good, or was he just visiting? I couldn't work that part out. |
| the.abstract.mind 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abusethat was sweet but so sad. the last line was powerful! it would be better if it was more developed but it's a great piece! good job |
| saccharine lust aerial 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abusewords are so gorgeous, like quiet eyes shimmering under burning candles. yours flicker and warm. thank you. please keep writiing. |