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Reviews For: Pretty Things

blackberrydream
2008-05-03
ch 1,
abuseOh wow, I LOVE this story. When I was reading the 'ten years later' part I was afraid it was going to have some crappy ending but that was so good! So sad! That last line was just really...powerful. You brought me to tears!
Xx-Blue-Eyed-Fey-xX
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abusei'm assuming teh ring is a wedding ring...wow, i'm suprised, for some reason that one rly hit me hard. your story is good if not sad. keep writing.
Dark Emo Shadow
2008-03-02
ch 1,
abuseow fuck that is sad-but so...i dunno is beautiful a good way to describe it? but it was wonderful to read.
The Cruel Irony
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abuseThat was amazing. Best slash ever; great job.

-Irony
.W E R E - H U N T E R.
2008-01-22
ch 1,
abuseWow.
That was AMAZING.
Somehow, I had a slight feeling that things wouldn't work out, but I didn't think it'd end like that. The last sentence was just..

Well, all I'm saying is that my Kleenex hates you.

Cheers;
W/H
magalina
2008-01-22
ch 1,
abuseD: You always make me sad... I mean that in agood way :) This one was beautiful, I loved the ending. Keep it up!! :D
Back of Beyond
2008-01-20
ch 1,
abuseSuch a sad (yet faintly happy) ending. :[ I want to read more! Oh, and was Jay back in America for good, or was he just visiting? I couldn't work that part out.
the.abstract.mind
2008-01-19
ch 1,
abusethat was sweet but so sad. the last line was powerful!
it would be better if it was more developed but it's a great piece!
good job
saccharine lust aerial
2008-01-19
ch 1,
abusewords are so gorgeous, like quiet eyes shimmering under burning candles. yours flicker and warm. thank you. please keep writiing.
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