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| The Sleep Of Reason 2008-02-20 ch 1,  | abuseQuite simply to put it in plain... Luverly. You keep me enthralled with your graceful writing Sincerely, The Sleep Of Reason |
| she smolders 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuseI quite like that last line, there's so much words left unsaid and hinted at.You have a brilliant way with words. |
| caralita 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abusei love this innocence and curiousity of this piece, yet there are subtle undertones of far more mature topics. it's beautifully done. |
| diffident 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is fantastic... The two stanzas fit together well (but crookedly). The first stanza is so slow and romantic. I like the idea of playing with shapes like this. marie |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseI think it's safe to say that pretty much everything you write will be on my favorite stories list. There's just something about the way you string the words together, it's just perfect. I wish I wrote like this. This is beautiful. Keep writing! :) |