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Reviews For: The Master and His Perfect Doll

UtterWeirdo
2008-05-26
ch 1,
abuseThis is a creepy, darkened and macabre masterpiece.
Fractured Illusion
2008-01-27
ch 1,
abuseHeya, I come from the Review Marathon (profile has link)

I am not sure if I have missed something, or if you have misunderstood, but I will go out a limb here. Being masochistic means they like to be harmed, as contrary to "sadistic" in which they like to harm. I believe you mean sadistic when you talk about the cruel master, because I see no proof of any masochistic tendencies in him. So yeah. That bugged me a bit.

"Her oh-so beloved creator."
There would be more impact if you ditched the oh-so, since it sounds mocking, but to the doll, it WAS her beloved creator. So. Yeah...

Great start, caught my attention. As far as I interpret from the "story" is that the master violates his puppets with his darkness...or sexually :P

For some reason this poem makes me think of an anime that has dolls in it... :P

- Frac
Angels Broken Shadow
2008-01-20
ch 1,
abuseWow. I loved this. It was amazing. Like...an evil version of Pinocchio!! Lol. Anyway, absolutely fantastic, as usual.
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