|Reviews for Cigarette Smoke|
| Chaos Apple 8/10/10 . chapter 1
The sense of potency and immediacy is impressive.
I miss you, sometimes.
| lost for words 2/9/08 . chapter 1
I like how it seems to flow out continuously, with no period marks except at the end. Nice.
(Your squinting as you smile" - I think it should be "you're".
| Jon Bermudez 1/21/08 . chapter 1
I liked this a lot, and thats rally saying something considering I dont really care much for poetry. I think since someone I know and care aboutvwrote the poem, it actually means something. Also, since I have a chance of figuring out what it means, it makes it that much better. Over all I like this piece a lot. I like your other works too, and I hope you'll keep me posted on new works