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| effervescent-sentiments 2008-02-27 ch 1,  | abuseGives me the feel of an echo. Really effective use of your creative lisence, girl! Haha. |
| Asphodelus 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseI can completely relate to this feeling, it's like a perfect personification. Or like poem-if-ication. I'm sure there's a word for that, but i'm too lazy to think of it right now. The best poems convey emotions as perfectly as this one does. |
| Kicking Poe 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abusethe trials of love in a nutshell, I think. even this momentary glance into an ending relationship touches on deeper truths. well done. cheers. |
| kelsi bones 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abusei really like the way you use sweetly in the first verse, bitter in the second, and then bittersweet in the last. also, the very last line, the part written in parenthesis... i don't know if thats part of the poem or a "note to self" type thing, but it's amazing. story of my life. *favoritizing* k.X |