(Sniffs) That was beautiful! Your choice of words was amazingly diverse and unique. Many times you managed to say the same things in completely different and refreshing ways. Reading it, I feel as if I've been swept away in a magnificent book where our hero is being protected on his long journey by a wondrous guardian angel. Fantastic job!

Sweet :)

oh wow
amazing
she sounds like one hell of a friend:) well done!

Very powerful stuff. I can tell you have a lot of feeling behind this and for the girl Angel. (who is lucky i might add to have a guy write her such a beautiful poem)

good stuff, keep writing

This was exquisite.. The use of a number of different angels was very suited and lovely. Just such a moving and beautiful poem.

I love it. And not just cause my nickname is Angel. xD

Wonderful poem and your use of language is great! I love it.

Keep writing!

-x-Eilish.

the imagery and word choice is beautiful... the idea of how powerful love can be is wonderfully expressed in this piece... amazing job

Very beautiful. You have a wonderful grasp of imagry and you've got a fantastic vocabulary. My only suggestion would be to put a bit of punctuation in it in a way to help with the flow. Just a suggestion. After all, poetry grants one freedom to do whatever they please.

WOW! Amazing, as always! You are definitely improving, if that's even possible! I love this- very well-written and the rhythm is flawless! Wish a guy would write a poem about me like that! =)
--Katrina

wow this is so awasome(i can't spell)i love this one alot! keep it up and great vocab! I can't even understand some of the words but they still send shivers up my spine! great job! I looked at all of your other stuff and added you to my favorite authors list!They all are just amazing

Sweet poem. Nice work with description. Good job!

~Twilight Starr~

Very, very nice. Incredible. Nothing more to say! That was so good. Good job.