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| simpleplan13 2008-02-24 ch 1,  | abuseit's incredibly sad... I really love the last few lines those were beautiful The only thing that seemed odd was the stories you told.. maybe it's a personal thing, but it confused me... Anyhow a really sad and well done piece PS If you're bored today check out the review game's review marathon.. there's a link in my profile and thanks for the reviews! |
| jekodama 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseMy heart goes to you. I know how it feels to lose your grandmother, and my loss was especially painful because the woman raised me. There isn't a day when I don't think about her. Seeing a person we love get diminished day after day is a very painful thing. |