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| naty-chan 2008-03-15 ch 1,  | abuseWhoa that has a really deep meaning to it. I guess that with out the sad part of rain, which causes tears and hatred, we would never have the good part of it either, happyniess and love. How can you be happy if youve never been angry? Or sad? Its a great poem. Loved it :] |
| Track8 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseThe beginning is dark and heartbreaking, but by the end, it lightens up a lot and really pulls itself together. I really like it. Adding to C2. -->Track8 |
| flea writer 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abusei like this... makes you think :) |
| Kiwi-kiwi6 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseWow. I love it. I just goes to show how that if you stick with your trials, you'll find joy. Great poem. |
| Dreaming Chica 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseWOW! I love the perspective on this! It really makes you think, and they way you had both negative and positive in there was fantastic! ♥ Dreaming Chica ♥ |
| Falcon0Rider 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was really pretty and I quite enjoyed reading it. Interesting idea for a poem, and you wrote it very well. :D Falcon |
| Canoegirl42 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseI love this poem! The imagery you create with the rainbow is awesome! Keep up the good work! |
| Unknown Survivor 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abusePerhaps a bit too repetitive, but thought provoking nonetheless. Keep up the good work. ^^ ~Unknown Survivor~ |
| readyforpeace 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseWow. I really like this poem a lot. The idea that suffering can be for a reason and that you need the contrast to experience great things is nice. I like the way this is set up, how after the lines "We would never see rainbows. Without pain we can’t know joy." the whole poem turns around. It made me smile. Thanks. Keep it up! :) ~peace |