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Poptart Guava Kid 2009-11-04 . chapter 12
o_O
take your time.
Poptart Guava Kid 2009-11-03 . chapter 4
pedo-bear
Waffles the Platypus 2009-10-23 . chapter 12
I greatly enjoyed reading this story and love the characters you have created. I think it would be interesting to see what it's like with Elijah and Brendan living together and how they adjust.

That being said, I'd like to offer my deepest condolences to you. I do not have any experience with such a situation myself, but your reluctance to work on the story is perfectly understandable. I wish you the best of luck, and hope that you are one day once again inspired to write.

Sincerely,
Waffles
HentaiZaru 2009-08-06 . chapter 12
WHAT?! I hope the person got hit by a car. ANd then eaten by animals. Take whatever time you need.
yaminoname 2009-07-30 . chapter 12
sorry
TheLadyPendragon 2009-07-29 . chapter 12
I feel terrible that something so bad happened to you, but I'm not going to say sorry and neither should you. Only the asshole responsible should be sorry. I really enjoy your work and I, like all of the other fans, can wait till you are ready to update. I think you're a very brave person and I hope more than anything that you feel better. I hope your writing can be an outlet for you and even if it isn't, I hope you find something that is. I'm sure you know that *any* of your readers would be willing to talk, if you wanted/needed to. Feel better.
littletealjar. 2009-07-29 . chapter 12
Didn't have time to log on, but like hell am I going to not say something about this!
jesus christ. I'm not going to say sorry, that seems so bland rite now and I know everyone else said that.

You are a strong person. And I respect you so fucking much for that. I love your work, that's why I was one of the people to ask that you update this story. damn, just cause someone hasn't been tested doesn't mean their a coward, and this is such proof.

on a professional note, I think you should try just putting little "filler chapters" with basically fluff or wutever you feel like writing using the characters from ur story! hmm, I'm thinking something funny and pointless. With random hand zaps, serious conversations that go nowhere, stuffed animals, coffee smothered in sugar and cream, and happy smiles. Writing is a wonderful portal to your special place(:
CB Scarlet 2009-07-28 . chapter 12
Oh my gosh, I am so sorry that that happened to you. I don't really know what else to say except that I'm really, really sorry you had to go through that. But it's incredible that you've been brave enough to tell somebody, especially the internet, and I hope you're okay, or at least working toward being okay. I know it must be really hard for you to cope with a situation like that. If I may suggest something that might help you, Alice Sebold wrote a book called Lucky that's a memoir about her rape, and everything she went through afterward. I'm not sure if it would help or make it worse, but I thought I would let you know just in case you wanted to check it out.

Once again, I'm so sorry. I hope you'll be okay!
Namaarie 2009-07-28 . chapter 12
I know I have no clue about what your going through, but even though it's only through the internet and I'm in some far off country, please know I'm here. I don't know what I can do, but anything's better than nothing, even if it's just being a reviewer and always being here waiting for new chapters, or talking over pm's, or even nothing. I dont know what I'm saying anymore, I'm horrible at trying to help, but what happened to you isn't right (i'll be sounding like a broken record to you I'm sure) and it makes me angry as to how the world could let that happen. I'm loosing all the words to make this make sense, but I'm sad and angry and I'm only a bystander. You shouldn't be sorry for not updating, we understand about real life (well, we should know seeing as we too live in rl >.>)
And I'm trailing off into stupidness, but then I was always like that.
Will keep on waiting
-Emily

P.S Sorry I have no good feedback, I have trouble with ideas for my own stories heh ^^"
demented cookies 2009-07-28 . chapter 12
OMG I HOPE YOU'RE OK! Don't worry, we understand (or at least I do, but I'm sure everyone else does too). WE WUV U!
Kusje 2009-07-28 . chapter 12
I'm so sorry. I truly do understand. Please, take your time. Not only with this, but with everything else in your life. I have known too many people who have gone through this. Please take care of yourself and do what you need to do.
MAGICAL.NARRATOR. 2009-07-28 . chapter 12
You probably don"t want to hear this but I'm am so incredibly sorry for what happened to you.

And thank you for your honesty. Most people would never have he guts to say/write that.

And since you were so honest with me I'll be honest with you. I would feel way to guilty to suggest what i want to see in this story. I feel like that would be demanding you to update and something tells me the last thing you need is pressure right now.

plus I'm not nearly as creative as you so my suggestions would all be crap anyway =]

and I don't mind waiting a while for your inspiration to return.
I just got an alert yesterday from a story that hasn't been updated in three (!) years... so do not feel bad for leaving your writing alone for a while if that's what you want to do.

your avid readers will be here when you return =]

-sincerely m.n.
Famirka 2009-07-28 . chapter 12
Oh, my gosh, I'm so sorry! It's horrible that you had to go through that; no one deserves that.

Don't apologize! This was not silly, at all. And I'm sure that me and everyone else appreciates you having the courageous to be this honest with us.

I don't have any advice for the story, cause I'm more of a reader than anything. (You think I would have picked up something by now...)

Again, I'm so sorry.
MAGICAL.NARRATOR. 2009-07-01 . chapter 11
love love love this story.

don't abandon this story. i command thee.

Elijah is ruggedly feminine with his 5 o' clock shadow and juicy sweat pants.lol.

Brendan is absolutely adorable.
MAGICAL.NARRATOR. 2009-07-01 . chapter 8
im not done reading this story but this chapter definitely deserves a review of its own.

brilliant.


that's all =]
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