Jeeze, I didn't know you were writing original fiction. You should have told me. Considering how much I enjoy your fanfic it's a foregone conclusion that I'd enjoy this. I just perused the first chapter and am well intrigued and pleased at the same time. I'm enjoying it so much, I should really be paying for it. ;)

Luther is cool with some Punisher-esque and perhaps Batman style qualities (not a bad thing at all, everyone has influences. I personally list mine at the end of every story and even Batman is a pastiche of Zorro). Nice to see an alternative to the usual white heroes we see in stories (I myself am guilty of this and decided to add some more diversity in one of my latest stories).

As a fan of detail oriented stories like those of Ian Flemming and Tom Clancy, your stories appeal to me. Your weaponry choices and descriptions are first rate.

The Doctor Moreau style DNA ideas are also interesting to me and relevant to our times as well.

If I can make one suggestion at all, it's maybe to put your captions for scene changes, such as

ARMORED TRUCK

NEW YORK CITY,

NOT FAR FROM RIKERS

in bold or something just to make it stand out a bit more so I know what I'm reading. That's just a formatting issue though.

I'm hooked and will definitely check in for more of The Sentencer as time allows.

All the best,

JW

BLAKK, you thought I forgot about you, man?

No way. I just hadn't found the time to review this one right here. Super-sick. Sounds like some Horror on Halloween **, but it's abso-**'-lutely savage.

As for the sacrifice in chapter 5: it was for the good of the mission...they died in service to the war vigilantes fight.

I was impressed with this. I'm gonna go ahead and get to the other two.