 Yours Faithfully 2008-11-12 . chapter 1I never was good in making new friends, and now you've completely put me off it ;D great story, love the suspence! |
 ravenurse 2008-03-19 . chapter 1Danielle is one creepy girl, and she sure seems to know how to get revenge! Great story! |
 Faster-than-without-water 2008-01-27 . chapter 1This was excellent.
It sounds like you really researched it. |
 Rozilla 2008-01-21 . chapter 1 Wow. ^^;; I love it.
The last line is amazing, makes you feel like the whole thing had been only a horrible nightmare.
Very nicely written. :D |
 Anon. 2008-01-20 . chapter 1 Weird, but good. I felt sorry for Danielle at first, but now...well, let's just never say I'll never trust someone who passes me a note that says, 'Want to be friends?' |
 SEMMU 2008-01-20 . chapter 1Very well done. Nice touch with the brownies. Excellent way to end. Write on! |
 Nate Odd Eikinskjaldi 2008-01-20 . chapter 1This is a great story. Very suspenseful, and very well-written, though there were a couple of a typos.
Keep up the good work. |