Reviews for One Memory of Hate

Koinaka
2008-01-20
ch 1,

abuseHey!
First some grammar-type things.
Withes in summary is probably supposed to be witches, right?
Kingdome should be Kingdom.
Fill should be feel
Mourning should be morning

Now that that is out of the way, this story has a lot of potential, but I am kinda confused about some things. Why do they call her Clair? I half-expected her to be in an asylum in present-day time for a few minutes! What is it with mirrors? I hope you add part 2 soon!

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