Hey! I wanna know what happens next!

Cliff hanger nu!!

You have to make Aidan stronger. He was trained as Kat and her father were. Her father is hell on wheels. Aidan wouldn't be that easy to take down, especially with Kat in trouble. Where did the baseball bat magically come from? Chase shouldn't be able to beat the living crap out of Aidan. Aidan should be able to defend his self against him. That's why Kat's father likes him so much.

You're killing me here. Where is the rest of the story? I would really like to finish it.

Damn it another cliff hanger!
anyways... youve been shirking on your duties I had to start writing my story which by the way needs some critism (reviews).

Yay! *steals story and runs away, finishes and comes back* alright you better get some more chapters up or.. or i shll pixel kick you!!

I like the ending of this chapter! It's a really good story and I found a lot of talent in this one.

I think that you should add a bit more description, but maybe that's just me :D I really like your style of writing and I noticed that you have a sequel to this, so I'm going to go check that one out... :)

Yay! It's alive!