OH DEAR please update! :3
Love how the story's progressing, though I really would like to see more development on Erin's character. And the names of the main characters are col.

i absolutely am hooked. wren and max are a riot and irresistable. erin's still a mystery and i would really love to see more of her character. you're writing style is great and i also like that you devote attention to all the other characters. please update soon!

I am totally loving this story. Though, I wish you would be more descriptive about the looks of the charactes especially Max, Wren, and Erin... I hope Max and Erin end up together. :)

so i started reading the entire story the other day and i just got hooked! i love it! its charming and funny and just great, really.

the only criticism i have is to better develop the characters of max, wren, and erin. i dont know if youre waiting for later chapters and simply havent gotten to it yet or what. but i really want to know more about their backgrounds, such as: where are maxs parents? what happened to wrens dad? and who is this mysterious erin? whats with her stand-offish personality and what was the reason for her transfer as a junior. [i am assuming they are juniors, as in 11th graders?]

otherwise, i absolutely love it and cannot wait for more! please update soon!

Hehehe. I knew it ^_^ A "D" huh? Some other Communist or Socialist name? or.. Russian? Dmitri? Domovoi?... eh...Danil? I guess I'll wait until later. Or.. I bet it's completely oxymoronic and has nothing to do with this... funny chapter. The guys are noticing Erin, hehe. Kremlin street. scary. Fauz sounds german. Ha. Sam is cute.

Dear me what ARE they planning. Anouther great, if twisted, chapter. Looking forward to the next one.

Hah! Another amusing chapter. Btw, just now I've realized how communistic Max's name is- Maxwell as is Marxist or Marx and Leningrad as in Lenin. I don't know if it's a joke of some kind but I find it absolutely entertaining. I really love your humor.

great story!
even better characters =]

love it, there isn't one part of this that isn't either charming or appealing...can't wait for the next installment. "troublemaking is an art but, hey, I'm no artist".. just a thought, lol

I find your writing really amusing and fun to read. I'm sorry you had to spend your birthday typing though. Btw, happy belated b-day :D

A new chapter :D You made my Christmas Eve better :D

Anouther great chapter. This is quickly turning into my favourite story. Looking forward to the next update.

Brilliant! You have an engaging and entertaining writing style.

Nice! I liked the poem! And I should have know that it was all planned! Ha! Well, anyway, can't wait to see where this is all going.

oh, man what can I say, one of the greatest most well-written stories I have had the pleasure of reading. I like the use of the words "snarky and macabre". Most of the scenes are brought directly to life as if from a movie about mischievous children, lol, it's great. Even the change of pov's is transitioned well. What more can I say, Great story. I hope there's a part 2.