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| x3life 2008-05-05 ch 1,  | abusehaha totally loved it! never thought of guys that way.. and never thought to give advice to a friend like that... =) |
| d666lisa 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseReally good oneshot, I loved the line: “Oh, he will be one hell of a repairman.” She said, “The best you’ll ever see.” You use said way too much though. |
| emerald 2008-04-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow...hahaha, us dear little fools do keep on waiting for that "best...repairman", don't we? Ahh, well, hopefully most of us find him. Very cute! Ally described how the "emotional crisis" sets in well. |
| Luna Turner 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseOnce again, the "said" thing was a problem. But that was it. I must admit, you're very good at avoiding typos. I did enjoy the story of the friend comforting a friend thing. Very creative and anything BUT cliche. ~Luna Turner |
| Pop the Bubble 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseheh cute analysis! haha i really thought this was about her and guy B, but, i like this ending! |
| Riley Hunter 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseNice oneshot. It was good :) I like it. |
| beccabrighteyes 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseAmusing. Sounds like something I would say. |
| MeLove 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseI know that this is a one-shot and all...but this would be a great line for a short story or something of the like. I mean, it would be the typical classic romance story, but you can never beat those. Anywho...I thought this was cute...very nice. MeLove |
| Anti-inflammatory 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was funny, quirky and open minded. I loved it. |
| loversloveliarslie x. 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseawe! such a good one shot :D |
| Hopelessly Clueless 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseCute story!! :) |
| Ruby 2008-01-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw. This was absolutley wonderful. I was certain something was going to happen with Guy B. You really threw me for a loop, lol. |