update your story FASTER its addictive!

i really want something more to happen with james, he seems cool, but im sure whatever you come up with will be enjoyable. please dont keep us waiting for too long! lol

Well, I'm truly wondering when you will update this one. :S Ah well, to start things off, I think this chapter could be a real firestarter for the plot after what had happened between Amber and Luke. And using the water gun is cheating. Period. :S Anyway wonder what are Luke's reasons for kissing Amber. I truly hope it won't turn out into the whole guy-and-girl-fell-in-love-out-of-nowhere kind of cliche. :S Anyway the whole barbeque thing is really making me super hungry now. Well here's hoping that you will continue on this one again. Has to go and eat something now. Bye! :)

P.S: In case you don't know, Atheran is up with a new chapter. Hope to see your review for it soon! ^^

Herro there. Me again. :) Sorry for being so late in reviewing here. Anyway, I guess this chapter is a step forward plotwise where Amber and Luke are concerned. Glad to see that Amber don't have any bratty problems here. Can't say the same for Luke lol! :) Okay all in all, I guess this chapter is used for building up the future plot more than any other thing else and I don't have any problems with that. And I wonder if there are any vital characters here apart from Amber and Luke. James seems like a friendly character to me though, so I don't think I'll mind seeing him getting a bigger role here. :)

Herro there. Sorry for being so late in reviewing. :( Anyway, I can say it's a good beginning chapter here with the potential fireworks abound. Anyway for some weird reason, I do find Amber rather attractive in a visual sense. Don't know if that's what you've intended lol! :D And the Will Turner part was a lol as well since I can't imagine anyone looking like Orlando Bloom. For the issue on looks, it seems that the general gal population likes while while the guys were opposite. I've got a friend here who is a fan of his tbh. And yep, she's a gal. Anyway interesting end to this chapter. Wonder what will happen next. ;) And yeah, thanks very much for the review on Atheran as well. :)

Yay it's back! Well, this was a really unexpected chapter. Luke just went and kissed Amber at random! But I guess that's how boys are. Well, please continue to write this!

Haha Luke got shoved into the lake by a little kid! Funny chapter, so hope you continue this!

Well this is an interesting start to the story. Stupid Luke almost ran her over! But whatever with him then...can't wait to see what happens next!

This is a VERY good story. I HATE luke right now because I hate when one minute u hate each other then the next he tries to make a move. Sigh... it's happened to me before but I kneed him in the prized possion then punched him in the nose.( he learned his lesson) PLEASE Update soon. This story is too good to let us wait forever to read more!

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY its about time you updated!

the kissing scene was kind of sudden, and you could have stretched it out longer, but i loved the water balloon fight. it was hilarious.:) update soon!

Hey Ollie i love ur story lol,
well love ya!

Angie

M. Nice well-written chapters are delicious. Yummy.

You, my dear, are a gem. I love you. I'd ask you to marry me, but my girlfriend would wipe me off the face of the earth, so I'll just say, you're an amazing writer. And stop putting yourself down about your writing! You don't deserve it!

You're a good writer. Keep it up!

nice story ... typical girl (kissing and slapping!?... although i'm a girl too so i can't say it's flattering)
also you got the part of greeks enjoying their food! heh... being a greek i should know
so please update as soon as possible i want to see what happens next!

I'm confused. This is very interesting even though confusing. I can't wait to see what happens but the Amber should have grabbed Luke's clothes and run off with them. Oh well I shall have to wait and see what happens next. Please update soon. =]
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