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| Mosaic Stains 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseThe title of this instantly caught my eye. The poem itself I felt was soft and sweet and made me think of white beaches and sea shells... innocence at its purest. |
| flea writer 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseI kind of like this, different but yet well written :) The last line is my favorite! |