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| flea writer 2008-01-20 ch 1,  | abusei really like this! great imagery, beautiful scene you created :) |
| SEMMU 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful imagery. Write on! The formating was a little different. Breaks seemed to be random. Are you emulating someone I'm not aware of, or does each break represent a new thought? Free verse is very loose; so there's nothing wrong with your breaks. Yet, I'm curious to know your motivation? |