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Lurid Black
2008-01-22
ch 1,
abuse'It'...
hehe It's like you've weaved a riddle into a poem, which i've been meaning to do for a while...
(but haven't got the time / or am too lazy) lol.
Sweet work =)
-Oh Btw Feign= Fake, to forge, etc.
Keep writing!
simpleplan13
2008-01-21
ch 1,
abuseI love riddles... the format is great and the descriptions are wonderful
Katrina Zeffirelli
2008-01-20
ch 1,
abuseLOVE! *sigh...* lol
half-sketched.staccatos
2008-01-20
ch 1,
abusekonban wa

You're very profound, I noticed. :) My favorite line is:

"If you separate your self from this cold world,
You’ll understand it."

I just like the way... I don't really know, really. That you say: you can't understand this kindness or whatever it is if you live in such a cold, cruel world - you need to separate yourself from it, become detached from the evil, to really comprehend the good.

Gute nacht
-Shan-
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