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| miscellanea 2008-04-10 ch 1,  | abuseI adore the whole amber/olive/saphire/opaqueness/radiating thing going on here. Although there are not many words, its very easy to picture. (I'm rather into art and photography, I envision things rather frequently and easily) |
| Anaare 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseFirst of all, many thanks for the reviews. Greatly appreciated. I have enjoyed reading this poem. It has a sweetness to it that I find refreshing. A certain serenity. Although I find some of the choice in line breaks "odd", this is a good and well-worded poem. Well done! |