Damn, no why won't you update! D I'm not giving a proper review until you do!

this is a great story...i don't remember if i already have this on alert. but i like it and i REALLY! want you to update this story.

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hey. hi.

we need to really pick this up again, because i really loved this story. so get up & let's start writing again (:

Gah, no updates in a while :(. I'm anxious to see what happens when they find out. XD.

damn XD only seven chapters T-T darn xD and it's almost been two months since neither of you updated...*dies* update soon please; I really like this story; this plot; this idea; XD everything!

Me like! I like, I like it! Keep it up and update soon..Peace.

Make yourself comfortable by reading some of my works.

xNabolionx

haha. i like what you've done with it.

hopefully i'll get some work done in the states, so we'll have the next [few?] chapters.

if you have the draft for further chapters, can you send them to me so i know what you want to do with the plot? otherwise, i'll just write whatever comes to mind.

:D

XD Hahaha! Very nice chapter. :) The nickname is cute and funny. I'll be looking forward to your next update.

Yay! A new update! Aww... poor Kelsey but I guess it's good for her too hahaha. I really liked this chapter. I hope you're having a nice summer, and I'll be looking forward to your next chapter. XD

Wow, one of the best stories I've read on here.

:O

Can't wait for more!

You're really good at this.

[:

Woo! Okay, so then that's why I got all confused! hahaha... I guess I'll review chapter 4 here... so that was really nice job. :) Poor Gabriel, he's gonna be so sad when he finds out huh? And then the thing with liars... sadness too. But that was a good chapter, so I'll be looking forward to your next one. XD

you didn't post chapter 4?

or am i getting senile?

Cool. :) Nice job... hm... something to improve? Well, I think that maybe you could add more dialogue and different scenes into this with all of the different thoughts and feelings of the people, then that would be pretty nice. :) It's really good already and the song is really fitting. Great job, and I'll be looking forward to your next chapter.

Hahahaha! Very nice. LOL Great chapter! I'll be looking forward to your next one! XD