Reviews for chasing the sunset

Reviews For: chasing the sunset

franticsquirrel 2008-05-17 ch 1,	abusethis is beautiful. it might be odd to ask a question in a review but- I'm wondering does the ending kind of imply the authors note already? where it is an external declaration willing it to happen rather than just being the excitement of it happening, kind of the quiet cry AH!almost! that seems to happen so often in life- or, is the ending just the opening of the possibility of the beauty described in the rest of the poem? it's good either way, I'm just wondering how you meant it.
Tytherpol 2008-05-17 ch 1,	abusethis is a really pretty poem. it's strong.
ilovetheopera 2008-04-04 ch 1,	abuse"following the sun/with the sun always on our faces"- i like these two lines, and the last verse very much. but then everything else seems normal in comparison except for your author's note which reeks of a revelation.
IlfirinEstel 2008-03-04 ch 1,	abusethe author's note kills me. but I understand that feeling and the regret that comes after it-- that idealistic, beautiful possibility and then the cold, empty reality that comes afterward. you really captured the beauty of the hope of a lasting relationship very well.
no.peace.los.angeles 2008-02-29 ch 1,	abusePretty poem. I love "two is the most beautiful number," and the last two lines are heartbreaking. Really gorgeous work. Nicely done. Keep writing! :)
smile for the sunshine 2008-02-24 ch 1,	abusethe author's note made me sad. the poem was so hopeful, the poem was so beautiful...and then it wasn't reality. fairytales can be sad sometimes. =[ only suggestion: maybe make the lines "with the sun always on our faces/two is the most beautiful number." their own stanza. it might be stronger that way. but everything was great. such a cute story...haven't heard about lockets in awhile. i still have one though. lol ps. here with the review marathon. check the link out on my profile if you're interested.
a silenced revolution 2008-02-07 ch 1,	abuse"We could fall in love." It completely prevents the poem from being sappy or cliché. In earlier stanzas, the reader can't really tell where the thoughts are going, but the last two lines add melancholy and poignancy. Beautiful.
faking closure 2008-02-04 ch 1,	abusechelbs beautiful. its weird to be back on here. love you
multiples of six 2008-01-24 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful, as always. I think the third stanza is my favourite..
sweden 2008-01-23 ch 1,	abusethis is beautiful. i liked the imagery, it looks like it's heavily influenced by surreal paintings and dreams.
Aquafied 2008-01-21 ch 1,	abusei think love is a rare moment you can only share with some people. maybe it ends most likely it ends but maybe it wont.
Kicking Poe 2008-01-20 ch 1,	abuseI love the ending repetition and the answering author's note. the whole poem toes the line between hopeful and melancholy...nice. cheers.
randompoetry 2008-01-20 ch 1,	abusei found this so beautiful. and then i read the authors note, and i got tearyeyed, and it changed the entire meaning of the poem. this was just...amazing.
Yellow Duvet 2008-01-20 ch 1,	abuseaww, so sweet ... but then the ending came and it was depressing. well, sort of. anywho, i loved the imagery. :D nice job.

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