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| the big crunch 2008-01-26 ch 1,  | abuse'i see your surface pulse with shadow as clouds pass, your heartbeat thundering against the roofs of neighboring huts;' i really like this poem. it is so beautful and well-written. ;) |
| smile for the sunshine 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abusethat was beautifully expressed. lovely. nature can be beautiful. good work at trying to let the world see just that. |