This was beautiful, and I believe I know who it is about. I think they' be happy to see their story so well put. But most of all I think it would touch them to know that you cared.

a beautiful sadness erupts after reading this.

You have written this very well handling this topic very Delicately.

GReat work!

very good poem. I think it's very emotional, very true, and very real. Keep it up.

Faith

konban wa

I read this poem twice, and it got better the second time. :)

"i’m sure that angels sound prettier than her equipment"

but just the words, “i love you.”

is enough to keep me going.

I loved this line; it was so... I don't know - just - inspiring, really. Beautiful.

This was my favorite line by far: "and roses are blooming without thorns." - It was poetic and painful and wistful and stunning. :)

Heartbreaking poem but beautiful nonetheless (or maybe because).

Gute nacht, tomodachi

-Shan-

Good work. I liked it.

-Flare